sharkinajar /Melarue Virren/ Werespider
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Elf/ Sorc/ female / Neutral Evil /lvl 1
What specific perk: WerespiderBackground info: Saeharice's mate. A complicated relationship where they want to claim dominance over each other. And Melarue possibly wants to eat Saeharice's head. Basically, a femme fatale based off of a black widow. A spicy lover that is oh so sinfully sweet but wants to also take over / kill her mate and become the matriarch.
Goals: have a really fun, weird rivalry with Knockknock when times align over weekends, and try to become the spider matriarch. Otherwise, plot and grow her power within the woods, and try to uproot Saeharice's seat. Conflict with a lot of the major factions- after all, she's an evil spider bitch. Perhaps make friends with some of the ravens. I doubt she'd join any of the major factions, unless goals align...
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This is very lacking for an app for something as cool as werespider. Knockknock has done stuff IG to earn it. Not sure this does it. I dont explanation of what they plan to actually do.
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I agree it nees a little more. He brought it up to me and seemed a little worried it might be lacking but didn't want to get bogged down in overly specific goals because his last app characters goals didn't pan out quite right or something.
Shark is a reliably good roleplayer and tends to stick to his characters. I don't doubt he would do a good job bringing fun to the server with this. I'm inclined to vote yes, and will ask him to flesh out his app some more if that's necessary. I don't think he needs hard bullet point goals or anything necessarily but a better idea of how he's going to mess with seaharice would be nice.
I had visions, I was in them;
I was looking into the mirror,
to see a little bit clearer,
the rottenness and evil in me. -
@voss_ said in sharkinajar /Melarue Virren/ Werespider:
Background info
Don't care
@voss_ said in sharkinajar /Melarue Virren/ Werespider:
Goals: have a really fun, weird rivalry with Knockknock when times align over weekends
K. Have a pre-determined rival. Sure. meh.
@voss_ said in sharkinajar /Melarue Virren/ Werespider:
try to become the spider matriarch.
What is that? why do I care? why does anyone care? and what -actions in game will be taken to do this-?
@voss_ said in sharkinajar /Melarue Virren/ Werespider:
plot and grow her power within the woods
Plot and grow power?
Do you mean quest to level 10 and intimidate people with PvP? Because you didn't say what this is.
@voss_ said in sharkinajar /Melarue Virren/ Werespider:
Conflict with a lot of the major factions- after all, she's an evil spider bitch.
Cool. What conflict? Beat them up randomly until they don't want to interact with you anymore? Lay traps and set up tricky situations for them to deal with? try to beat them to the punch with their achievements? secrete poisoned magical items to them as "trojan gifts"?
What, what is the conflict? Conflict means nothing.
@voss_ said in sharkinajar /Melarue Virren/ Werespider:
Perhaps make friends with some of the ravens.
Eh.
@voss_ said in sharkinajar /Melarue Virren/ Werespider:
I doubt she'd join any of the major factions, unless goals align...
K, don't care anyway.
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@man-in-the-mist said in sharkinajar /Melarue Virren/ Werespider:
ask him to flesh out his app some more
In order to flesh it out, there would have to be an app in the first place.
This is just a request to have the new subrace.
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I'm sure shark will be fun too.
But that's not an app.
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I told him as much but he wanted me to post it anyway.
Will just poke him about it, think he didn't want to write a long app again but he's gonna have too :P
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Doesn't have to be long.
Just has to have the stuff that matters.
What are they gonna DO in game.
I have been entirely impressed by single lines of an app, and not cared about the rest.
Two good lines is more than enough.
And it's not about goals. I actually don't massively care about those, I care about what they are gonna do in game ....(to achieve those goals, which I often don't even read)
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Any further input on this before I mark it as denied?
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Shark said he'd send me a fleshed out version. hasn't done so yet though.
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