If there's no way to 'buy' a campfire without leaving the city, then yeah I think there should be.

Don't feel like this needs to be a feytouched.

So this post is a little bit confusing so I'll summarize how I understand it.

Ceak wants to play a minor noble whose house fell out of favor after the rebellion. They'll follow their view of Malar's dogma which means that the poor/non-nobles should be hunted down if they don't bow to nobility.

Their ultimate goal is to dethrone the Queen and insert their own household as the new ruler. I presume this will translate into trying to make their own house more prominent for the most part.

To jumpstart that they'll latch onto whichever noble house faction will suit them best.

The part about the Fire Knives seems to be a bid for NPC sponsorship from an assassins guild. I don't know what they're expecting from this, but it's EIG I guess so that's fine?

To get attention they want to start a semi-secret ''gentleman club'' with anti-queen sentiments to promote themselves over the more established nobles.

The actual on-creation application distills down to ''Minor Nobility.''

Which they'd need for any of their motivations to make sense and have at least a little bit of sway.

Half Elf / TBC / NE / 4/ Fighter

What specific perk(s) (faction, special background, etc)

Minor Noble Background, Specialist Background (Fire Knife Assassin & Malarite Heresy)

A few sentences on how you plan to make the server more fun to play on for everyone, through your characters actions/story.

A snobby hybrid of elf and man, he absolutely believes that he is the epitome of elegance, grace and brilliance.
He follows a twisted Malarite heresy where the poor and the destitute must be hunted like game and removed, as they tarnish everything beautiful about the world. They steal from the rich and mess up expensive shoes by shitting and vomiting in the street.
He believes above all that nobility should rule, absolutely and final. His grand plan is to remove the Queen from her position, and see his own family ascend to the top of the tree, even if it’s on fire and covered in blood.
Will latch on to Delzuld or Braerwinter and attempt to form a “noble council” of sorts (Gentleman’s Guild), sew some anti-monarchy sentiment and try to “catch the eye” of a Fire Knife NPC. Nothing will be off the table with regards to claiming power!

If you're not applying on your normal log-in or handle, what accounts have you played under?
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Brief background as relevant to the application.

From a minor noble house in the Hullack region that was thrown out during the rebellion, with grand plans to see it rise to prominence. He will use a double bladed sword and be very swashbuckling. He will not be a ranger.
Other

Happy for feedback / suggested adjustments!

@Strife-and-Discord
Fix it please, no sense taking the increased CL feat if it didn't give you the benefits.

If we can add Feytouched that'd be sweet.

We don't have fey-touched but this story can still be told without that subrace.

Instead the Wintercourt could be worked into the background and we could give them something like a trinket or mark to represent those ties.

However if the point of the app was more that they wanted to play a White Dragontouched then my feedback is to rewrite the app to focus more on roleplaying that.

Sound more like a Feytouched than a Dragontouched, granted we don't have a feytouched subrace.

He is aware moon elves can be extremely pale right? If its just for the appearance this doesn't need to be a subrace. It reads more like dragontouched being tacked on to be more special, rather than it being an important part of the story.

I'd find it more interesting if they weren't a dragontouched but an elf who was seduced or tricked by the Winter Court.

We're looking into Practiced Spellcaster as a feat to facilitate all spellcaster multiclasses rather than make a seperate spellsword class.

Truly shocking.