If we can add Feytouched that'd be sweet.

We don't have fey-touched but this story can still be told without that subrace.

Instead the Wintercourt could be worked into the background and we could give them something like a trinket or mark to represent those ties.

However if the point of the app was more that they wanted to play a White Dragontouched then my feedback is to rewrite the app to focus more on roleplaying that.

Sound more like a Feytouched than a Dragontouched, granted we don't have a feytouched subrace.

He is aware moon elves can be extremely pale right? If its just for the appearance this doesn't need to be a subrace. It reads more like dragontouched being tacked on to be more special, rather than it being an important part of the story.

I'd find it more interesting if they weren't a dragontouched but an elf who was seduced or tricked by the Winter Court.

Truly shocking.

If they're not planning anything special on this PC, they're probably not planning anything on a new one. I assume they just want to play their old mercenary because that's easier, so I say why not.

Kinda feels like he's bouncing between things and abandoning when he doesn't get a DM interaction of the week.

I've recieved some feedback that the overal goal of the faction is unclear, so I will offer some minimal OOC guidance.

This is a faction for a longterm plot, and while there's an ultimate goal. Its up to your character what to do with it, or to even pursue it at all.

I will run events as they come up. If you have a plot-related idea you need a DM for feel free to contact me about it, like how plots are handled usually.

Faction Goal

Return to Ashkara and reclaim your position/title/wealth ect ect.

Short term Goal(s)

Gather allies within and without Arabel.
Find a way to return to Ashkara.
Protect the heir.
Survive.

I fear I've no directions to any relics laying about just now.

However where rumours are concerned. I believe the Tyrant's clergy were quite active in Tilverton until recently, perhaps something of their influence remains burried there?

On the matter of the Thief. Some time ago I hear a shadowy cult of burglars and villains were operating from the Manticore. Their leader was said to be able to disappear into shadows, perhaps that is of interest to you?

Regards,
Johan Vintergarde

Quartermaster Amir yi Ashkara

One of the few surviving Askar who fled Ashkara into the Kingdom of Arabel.

Amir is a loyalist and veteran of many conflicts in the land of intrigues.

He serves the exiled court as quartermaster, man-at-arms and occasional voice of reason between the varied outcasts of the court.

Master Zashir

A foreigner and mostly unknown figure within Ashkara. The 'Master' Zashir served as the sole tutor of the second prince for many years before the former's exile.

During the events that saw the prince's followers branded as outcasts, Zashir helped many of the newly exiled flee to the Kingdom of Arabel to avoid execution. This however took a toll on his body, leaving him crippled and weakened.

Within the exile court he now serves as an advisor and font of knowledge.

Prince Khemed yi Ashkara

The second son of Pasha Mansoor, leader of the Exiled Court and rightful heir of Ashkara.

While currently a serving as a glorified coat-rack due to a Gorgon's curse. The second prince is perhaps the only chance for the exiled Ashkarrans to return to their homeland.. whether for good or for ill.

I trust in your wisdom on this matter and urge all to assist. However, in the same breath I offer this caution.

Seek our enemy before attempting such a delicate matter.

Whilst the thralls of Ardashir circle us like vultures, they will find and expose our weakness. We must elimiante or trick our enemies into abandoning their hunt, only then can we breathe easy.

Prepare as you will, but keep this reality in mind.

~ Zashir